So with the third iteration of my pitch I was told to focus more a better flow of information and to practice my pitch more. So in order to change this I walked through it multiple times and tried to remain constant and well versed with concise information.
Over all it’s by far better than my first but as the prompt says practice makes perfect.
Connor,
ReplyDeleteI really think you learned a lot from all of your critiques. You seemed way more prepared and it flowed nicely. I do agree that you need to practice your elevator pitch but sometimes its hard because you may need to change it up depending on who you are talking to in an elevator. Good job!
Hi Connor,
ReplyDeleteI think you've definitely been improving upon your elevator pitches since we first had to do this assignment. I think you did a good job of improving upon your critiques that me and the other people in this group gave you. I think you did a nice job dressing professionally and speaking articulately to get some of your points across. Overall, I think you did a nice job and I can see some improvement. Keep up the good work!